
INTRODUCTION
When it comes to creating a standout resume, one crucial mistake most people make is simply listing their previous jobs and responsibilities. The truth is, having a job is not enough. What truly makes a resume stand out is demonstrating that you were good—no, great—at your job.
Unfortunately, most resumes only accomplish the former. They focus on what you did rather than how well you did it.
SHIFT THE FOCUS: EVIDENCE OF EXCELLENCE
So how do you prove that you were great at your job?
That’s your assignment for today.
For each position you include on your resume, sit down and ask yourself this simple but powerful question:
“What is the evidence that I was good at my job?”
This single question shifts your resume from a list of duties to a showcase of achievements. It invites you to go deeper than just outlining tasks and prompts you to reflect on your impact, growth, and successes. This evidence will form the basis for your resume bullet points.
Here’s why this is critical: Employers aren’t just hiring someone to perform tasks—they’re hiring someone who will deliver value and make a positive impact. Your job is to highlight how you’ve done that.
TURNING RESPONSIBILITIES INTO ACHIEVEMENTS
So how do you prove that you were great at your job?
That’s your assignment for today.
For each position you include on your resume, sit down and ask yourself this simple but powerful question:
“What is the evidence that I was good at my job?”
Let’s break this down further. Instead of stating your responsibilities (which everyone who’s had that job could also list), focus on quantifiable results and concrete accomplishments.
For example:
Instead of this:
Try this:
Notice the difference? The second version not only tells what you did but also proves you were successful at it by including specific results.
TIPS FOR HIGHLIGHTING EVIDENCE OF SUCCESS
THE RESUME BULLET POINT TRANSFORMATION
Let’s go back to the exercise. Sit down and revisit each position on your resume.
Ask yourself:
What is the evidence that I was great at this job?
For example:
Once you have this evidence, reframe your bullet points. Make each one a testament to your impact, not just a recap of your duties.
SETTING YOURSELF APART FROM THE COMPETITION
Including this kind of information on your resume (evidence that you excelled at your job) is what will set you apart from your competition. Most resumes simply don’t go this far. They tell, but they don’t show. By providing real proof of your effectiveness, you create a resume that leaves a lasting impression on hiring managers and recruiters.
Remember, it’s not just about what you did, but how well you did it. And when your resume reflects that, you elevate yourself from just another applicant to a top contender.
Take the time today to revisit your resume with this in mind, and see how you can transform it into a powerful document that tells the story of your success.
Because being great at your job isn’t something you should just assume people know. Show them.
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